Rabu, 18 April 2012

Discourse assignment 2


Writing Summary by Fitri Nurwiyanti
An article in Campus magazine entitled “Publics Participation For Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the first school Taman Siswa built by Ki Hajar Dewantara. Education paradigm is growing in Indonesia to fulfill the sprit of education these days. Citizens should get competent education. Education is responsibility by government and the side of private sector individual and group. Because of limited cost, the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better than government schools. Supported by complete and good facilities make this school rather expensive because it also promises the good management on its education.
Indonesia has pesantren as education system (Islamic boarding house models). It is classified into two models: First Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students and students can stay and study freely. They study about Islamic science for the sake of individual and public. The traditional pesantren still be one choice by our society under class social. Second, Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students. They do not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art. They are prepared to face the era that always changes.
Without already realized the friction that could be happened from motivation of organizer and management of existing education. To get the good education with their equipment of facility they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children. Poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. Government and private sector individually and group have big homework to repair their education inspect that aims on making organization of education.
I agree with the writer who says that about publics participation for education is importance. He says that the education not only managed by government, but also the society has contribution to build education together, about how they create good education, both the facilities, system and soon. The government should think that all the society level can enjoy education reasonably. Moreover, to get good education with equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children. I think that the middle society should optimalize brilliant brain to be able to compete with others. The writer says that the poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. I think that this statement is true. The government and the private school should really provide scholarship for the students who have competence to enjoy education.



DEIXIS
1.      Personal Deixis
a.       They study about Islamic science for the sake of individual and public.
ð  They refer to the students in pesantren as the third speaker.
b.      They do not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art
ð  They refer to the students in pesantren as the third speaker
c.       They are prepared to face the era that always changes.
ð  They refer to the students in pesantren as the third speaker
d.      they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children.
ð  They refer to the students in pesantren as the third speaker
e.       Poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education
ð  Poor people refer to people who can’t get formal education.
f.       Government and private sector individually and group have big homework to repair their education inspect that aims on making organization of education.
ð  The government refers to people who have authority in state.
ð  Their refer to the students in pesantren as the third speaker
g.      I agree with the writer who says that about publics participation for education is importance.
ð  I refer to Fitri Nurwiyanti as the first speaker.
h.      He says that the education not only managed by government
ð  He refers to Miftakhul Khoiri as the second speaker.
i.        The government should think that all the society level can enjoy education reasonably.
ð  The government refers to people who have authority in state
j.        I think that the middle society should optimalize brilliant brain to be able to compete with others.
ð  I refer to Fitri Nurwiyanti as the first speaker.
k.      The writer says that the poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education.
ð  The writer refers to Miftakhul Khoiri as the second speaker
l.        I think that this statement is true
ð  I refer to Fitri Nurwiyanti as the first speaker


2.      Temporal Deixis
a.      Education paradigm is growing in Indonesia to fulfill the sprit of education these days.
ð  These days refers to the day when the utterance produce
3.      Spatial Deixis
There is no spatial deixis in this article.
4.      Social Deixis

5.      Discourse Deixis

Jumat, 13 April 2012

Discourse Assignment 1


KPK to assist AGO’s investigation in alleged Chevron graft case

The Jakarta Post, Jakarta | Thu, 03/29/2012 6:19 PM 

Bambang Widjojanto: The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) deputy chairman. JP/Ricky Yudhistira.
The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) promises to help the Attorney General’s Office (AGO) in the latter’s investigation into a corruption case which has implicated PT Chevron Pacific Indonesia.
KPK deputy chairman Bambang Widjojanto said on Thursday that the Commission will support the prosecutors in line with new memorandum of understanding that was signed by the two law enforcement agencies and the National Police. The agreement highlights ten sectors in Indonesia that are prone to fraudulent practices, one of which is the oil and gas sector.
“We will back up our colleagues from the AGO, using coordination mechanism based on today’s agreement,” Bambang told The Jakarta Post on the sidelines of the meeting at the AGO headquarters. He added that the corruption cases in the oil and gas sector had been one of the Commission’s main concerns. Bambang claimed that in 2011, his agency saved Rp150 trillion (US$16.57 billion) of the state’s money in the oil and gas sector. “It was more than 10 percent of our state’s budget (APBN) that year,” he said.
Separately, Junior Attorney General for Special Crimes Andhi Nirwanto welcomed the support, noting that the anti-graft body has promised them to help the investigation. “Pak Bambang has promised us that if the KPK investigators find anything related to the [Chevron case], they will present it to us,” Andhi told the Post, adding that his team constantly submited reports to the KPK about their case examination’s progress.
Investigation into the case, which involves the company’s bioremediation program from 2003 to 2011, started after the AGO received reports that the environmental project was fictitious.
The AGO accused the local branch of American energy giant Chevron of appointing incompetent companies, PT Green Planet Indonesia and PT Sumigita Jaya, to carry out the program. Both companies, according to the AGO, were not certified for waste treatment work. Therefore, the AGO considered the project to be fictitious and has claimed that it caused state losses amounting to Rp 200 billion.
Andhi explained that the money had been disbursed to Chevron by upstream oil and gas regulator BP Migas. However, he has yet to comment on whether there was negligence from the country’s regulator. He confirmed that the Articles 2 and 3 of the 2001 Anti-Corruption Law would be used to investigate the case. Each article carries maximum sentence of 20 years in prison. The AGO identified seven suspects in the case and barred them from leaving the country. Five out of seven suspects are Chevron executives. (asa)

 COHERENCE
1.      Substitution
In the article above, the write use some substitution. They are:
-          The agreement highlights ten sectors in Indonesia that are prone to fraudulent practices, one of which is the oil and gas sector.

ð  The sentence above belongs to substitution of noun. Because the word “ten sector in Indonesia” changes  become “one of which” and Ten sector is noun

-          PT Green Planet Indonesia and PT Sumigita Jaya, to carry out the program. Both companies, according to the AGO, were not certified for waste treatment work.

ð  That sentence is substitution of noun. The word “PT Green Planet Indonesia and PT Sumigita Jaya” change become “both companies”.

2.      Reference
From the article above there are some reference that used by the writer. But all of them belong to anaphoric. They are:
-          He
-          It
-          The

3.      Conjunction
The article above also uses some conjunction. They are:
-          And
In the sentence, “He added that the corruption cases in the oil and gas sector had been one of the Commission’s main concerns”
-          If
In the sentence, “Pak Bambang has promised us that if the KPK investigators find anything related to the [Chevron case]”